Which story did ChatGPT write?

The NYT challenged both writer Curtis Sittenfeld and ChatGPT to create a “beach read” to see which one was better.

Readers voted on the short story prompts.

They requested beach reads about naps and redemption and tattoos gone wrong; puppies and sharks and secrets and white linen caftans; margaritas and roller coasters and mosquitoes; yearning and bonfires and women serious about their vocations.

Definitely a shouting at the improv group after a couple of margaritas vibe.

Anyhoo…

Curtis Sittenfeld’s story turned out to be a little goofy, a little unexpected, funny and poignant.

And honestly, ChatGPT’s version was so boring that I wouldn’t have finished it if it wasn’t for this contest.

Here are some things that Sittenfeld did and ChatGPT didn’t do:

✍ Started writing more than a week before he even knew what the reader-selected prompts would be. (He didn’t want to rush and get sloppy)

✍ Drove to the real place in his story to see what it looked and felt like.

✍ Included a real band he’d seen perform in the story.

✍ Got feedback on his first draft from several family members and friends.

✍ Wrote a first draft that was almost two times too long.

✍ Cut that draft but still asked his editor if he could exceed the agreed-upon 1,000-word length by about 200 words.

Something Curtis Sittenfeld didn’t do that ChatGPT did:

🤖 Wrote its story in 17 seconds.

ChatGTP is great at a lot of things but was its story creative? God, no.

But if AI ever starts doubting itself, challenging briefs and begging for more time, then we’ll all be in trouble.